Showing posts with label Caitie. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Caitie. Show all posts

Friday, April 20, 2012

The dragon slowly stirred

It was   long before the Dino's where even on earth.There was a dragon he was   mean that no other dragon would stand with in 200 feet by him.He always felt so alone so bord. He spent most of his time sleeping. One day when he fell asleep he had a dream that everyone loved him. But a little bird woke him up. When he awoke  stirred and was very soft at that. But once he was fully up he burned the bird to peices. Then he found out that being mean did not solve any of his problems.

Thursday, March 29, 2012

Marley and me by john grogan

     Are you a dog lover?   If you are then marley is a great book for you then.  The book Marley  and me is about a dog who ALWAYS finds his way into trouble.  He gose from eating underwear to eating jelwery!  Once he even drank salt water and direaed in the water. At that dog beach they are no even alowed to thake a pee in the sand.  Read this book find out the consonqenses.
     I can relate to this book because when I was little I would get into everything to Marleys owner had to put everything higher then he could reach.
     The sadest part of the book is when Marley was to sick to go out side to go to the bathroom.
     If you are abbsessed with dogs you would love this book.
     Iwould recommed this book to a person wh likes getting into things.
     this is a five star book*****.

Friday, January 20, 2012

A big book

School
it's like a
big book
with all the
exiting chapters
School
it's like a
 big book
with all the
wonders on whats gonna come next
School
it's like a
big book
with all the
fun stuff
School
it's like a
big book
with all the
nice people
School
it's like a
big book
with all the
best friends
School
School
School

Thursday, January 12, 2012

Ocean

     Ocean
glesning in the sun light
wshhh wshhh
oh how high can the tide go
the water feels so cold
         crash
         crash
         crash

Thursday, December 8, 2011

Letter to SPC ASHLEY ADAMS

Dear SPC ASHLEY ADAMS,

  How many badges do you have?  How dose it feel to be serving the US?  How dose it feel to be away from your family for so long?  How old where you when you stared serving? How long have you been serving?  Why did go to serve?  do you ever have any free time?  If you do how do you normally spend it?  What inspired you to serve?

                           Sincerely,
                                   Caitie

How our craft lessons are applied

Recently we learned about how authors slow down the pivotal moment or "hot spot" in their story so that the reader can really feel what the character is feeling and savor the turning point of the story.  Caitie did a wonderful job of doing just this when she rewrote a scene in her story using the craft of slowing down the hot spot.

Friday, November 11, 2011

Class Pet Request

November 10,2011

     Dear Mrs.Goins,
    
     I am writing to ask if we can have a class pet.  I feel that a class pet would teach us responsibility.  And teach us about it's life cycle.
     If we get a class pet we can feed so it will stay alive.  If we get a class pet we can also study it's environment.  If we get a class pet we will make better choice's so we can have a turn caring for it.
     I know that sense you have Jack so you can not take the pet home if we were to get a class pet or sense money is tight or somone might be allergic to a  type of a pet.
     But we can  take turns taking the pet home and we can do a fun raser.  We can try to find a pet that none of us are allergic to.
     Imagine walking into a class room where responsble third grage kids happly nurture a class pet.
Senserly
      Caitie