Monday, September 26, 2011

The Time it Snowed

Me and my dad were outside when a glistening snowflake fell from the sky and landed on the ground.  Then, the sky started making more snowflakes.  Soon the grass was under a blanket of snow.  Then,I asked my dad if I could get Julez and my jacket.  He said yes!  Then I grabbed my jacket and knocked on julez's door.  When Julez came out,we started [with our tongues out] chasing snowflakes.  Suddenly,the snow stopped.  The last snowflake landed on the ground.  Me and Julez happily went inside to play.

3 comments:

Mrs. Goins said...

I really like the descriptive language you used to describe the snowflakes, and how you zoomed in on a small moment!

Anonymous said...

It only snowed once only once.!!!!


monika

Anonymous said...

Thank you Mrs. goins and Monika!
Jasmine