Me and my dad were outside when a glistening snowflake fell from the sky and landed on the ground. Then, the sky started making more snowflakes. Soon the grass was under a blanket of snow. Then,I asked my dad if I could get Julez and my jacket. He said yes! Then I grabbed my jacket and knocked on julez's door. When Julez came out,we started [with our tongues out] chasing snowflakes. Suddenly,the snow stopped. The last snowflake landed on the ground. Me and Julez happily went inside to play.
3 comments:
I really like the descriptive language you used to describe the snowflakes, and how you zoomed in on a small moment!
It only snowed once only once.!!!!
monika
Thank you Mrs. goins and Monika!
Jasmine
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