I could feel the crickle cracklng of my grandma's road. My footsteps sprinted to the door. I did not feel like knocking so I burst through the door. My grandpa said "hi"and guess what I did, I hugged my grandpa so tight that I could feel his heart beating fast.
Dogs we're barking LOUD! The delicious smell got to me so I ran to the kitchen because I knew my grandma would be baking delicious homemade stew! It was so yummy and my mom was so excited that she in Mississippi with her parent's and I looked up and I saw it my mom's pretty little smile!
7 comments:
My favorite line is when you hugged your grandpa so tight you could feel his hear beating fast :o )
Lillie! I absolutely LOVE your short story. You have really been observant of our visits to your Grandparents house in Mississippi and how Happy it makes me! I Love You!!!
Mrs Goins, Lillie was so excited to show us her blog. Thank you for making her feel so special! She loves you so much. I absolutely loved Lillie's short story. My favorite part also was...she hugged her Grandpa so tight she could feel his heart beating fast. Loved It!!!
Mrs.Barfield- Thank you so much for stopping by and reading our blog! Lillie loves writing and her love for family shows in her work : o )
That great writing lIllie.
Monika
Jasmine .N says: I love these words : my mom's pretty little smile!
THANK YOU......for all of the wonderful comments......of course!!!!
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