November 10, 2011
Dear Mayor,
My name is Jeltzia and I'm in the 3rd grade at Sandra Mossman Elementary School in Mrs.Goins classroom.Will you please consider of us having a class pet. Because we will feed it, be responsible, and make it survive.
I think it's a good idea why we should have a class pet because we would feed it, play with it, and be responsible for our class pet. To make sure our class pet is fed every day, and has water everyone will take turns. I think the best way to feed the pet is to have a container with the right amount of food and water. The kids will be more responsible because they are going to have the opportunity to play with it.
You might think it's a bad idea that we have a pet because it can be a lot of work that some people don't want to do, might smell bad, it could be really noisy.
We want a pet because it could be fun and it could help us learn about the pet. Students can learn more about their pet's life cycle, habitat, what they eat and what they do. By having a class pet students will be come a better scientist.
Imagine not having a class pet. Everyone whining for a class pet. To buy a class pet is to save money, and when you buy a class pet they will feed it and make it survive for as long as the life cycle goes.
Sincerely,
Jeltzia
3 comments:
What really hung on to me was that last sentence " we will feed and take care of it for as long as the lifecycle goes". It is so discriptive that you can hear the writer talking!
I'm thinking a computerized pet would be perfect!
mia sead That was a awsome post
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