After dinner I
get a treat,
I
a treat called,
Smarties,
Smarties are so
good
and OH the
Colers
red,
green,
yellow,
orange,
And pink.
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9 comments:
I love the line breaks & white space in your poem! I can't wait to begin our poetry writing unit to see other poems that you will write : o )
I love the line breaks and it seemed so much like a poet wrote it wait who am I kidding you are a poet in fact a great poet!
Nick i love smarties to and that was a very good poem i liket it a lot
Grant
Nick I think that your poem was good and I also like smarties too.
From Karleigh
Nick, that was a really good poem and I love how you put stress on OH. I't lets the reader know that you are serious.
jasmine
That's really good nick.
Monika
Nick, you are so descriptive! I thought you were a author when I saw this poem! :0)
Jasmine .N
I also love smarties ,Nick!
Jasmine
I like your story so much I know what you mean smarties are so good mmmm:)
ANDREW
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