The day she died
I cried and cried!!!
Its like a puzzle but without......
a peice.
My tears the color of heaven
drop onto my cotton blue shirt
SPLISH SPLASH
onto the ground
where my brother lays crying.
But you always know
that you can always hold their heart
close by!!
Welcome to the Writing World of Third Grade!
4 comments:
Lillie- This broke my heart to read. You can tell how much you value family : o )
That is so sad ! :( But i't is so descriptive!
Jasmine .N
Lillie - it's heartfelt to read it- I love it.
Monika
I know how you feel Lillie but that was the best poem I have ever heard from a girl.
alessia
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