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Friday, April 20, 2012
The chocolate bunny melting in the sun!
I was hungry but i did not have money so I was walking bay the the chocolate store wen I step back I found 20 dollars so I went in and I bout 1 chocolate bunny,2 chocolate bars,and 16 candys. I went to ask how much does it cost and he sead 19 $ he gave me a bag with a hole and I did not now. I put in the chococlate bunny in first then the 2 chocolate bars then the 16 pieces of candy then I left and i went home and I opend the bag I was loking for my chocolate bunny but it was not their so I ran back and I found the chocolate bunny but it was melting in the sun so i did not pic it up but I went home crying.
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2 comments:
That was a very good story, Emory. You could have turned that into a math reading problem!
Emory next time check spelling okay but that's a great story! Monika
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