Friday, May 25, 2012

persuasive writing

Dear Mrs.McBride,

     I want this district to be quadblogging and blogging on the computers to leave comments to people around the world.
     These are my 3 reasons why:  it gives kids better ideas for comments, good comments, happy people!  make a change!
     Kids can go to a wrong site that's inappropriate kids can lose their privileges on the computer. But kids know they should "x" out inappropriate sites they shouldn't see online on the internet. They're allowed for appropriate sites not inappropriate.
     I think that using computers would be better instead of wasting paper because it can make a big change here.

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