writing leter to Mrs McBride

Dear Mrs McBride

  Paper is not enough for me, when blogging the whole world can see it. But on blank paper only my teacher can see it.
  Kids should be able to blog because if we see bad stuff we will x out of it,and we will stay off bad sites,and we will not leave bad comments on other peoples blog.
  Bad people leave bad comments so if we see bad comments we will delete it and we will have cation on that site.
  So please can we post our story's on digital diaries so other people can comment on my work.
                           Nicholas
                                          Atkinson.