November 10,2011
Dear Mrs.Goins,
Why should we have a classroom pet? Because some animals need shelter and a owner. Because I know that you like pets,and because some animals die from not eating.
Animals really need shelter and a owner,because if animals can't do anything without a shelter,they'll die.I know that you love Jack and you'll love this pet. I know that animals die from not eating and if they die it will not be good. I say yes and I hope you too.
I think you will say no because you don't know what you'll do with the pet for holiday break and spring break.Some kids might say no because the pet will stink, plus we don't even know where to put it.
I think for the holiday break and spring break.Students will each take turns to take the pet home and you need to bring it back when holiday break is over. We need solve where to put the classroom pet if it's a bird we must hang it up somewhere,but if the is in a cage we should put it on a table.
Can you imagine having a classroom pet? Well I can. I love walking into a class that has a pet and I hope you too. Can you imagine walking into a classroom that is so happy because they have a classroom pet.
from,
Alessia
4 comments:
I noticed you used strong sentenses so most likely our class will get a classroom pet.
I adopted our pet doxie, Jack. If we could have a dog as a class pet I would be all for it!
I know ow bad you want to get a class pet.
Monika
This is very convincing, Alessia! Jasmine
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