Thursday, May 24, 2012

Persuasive Letter Digital Diaries

Dear Mrs.Mcbride,

     I think that kids should have there wights to get on line with there own account.And get on Digital Diaries.
     There reasons why I think that are.  One if you write online people across the world can read it.Two you don't read whats outside you have no time.  Three when people around the world comment you feel good and want to write more. 
     You will probably say oh no kids might leave bad comments.
     But the solution for that is to have the teachers teach us how to comment.
     Can you please do that for me.

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