persuasvie letter: for blogging and digital diaries

     Dear Mrs.McBride,
     I am asking if all the kids can blog because it can help us learn.  Please we need to because we can comment and make are own blog.  So get on a computer and blog.
     One reason why I think we can blog because it is fun.  Two because you can learn what they are learning.  Three because getting on the computer and learn stuff.
     What thay might say is some bad words and put some bad pitchers on it.  But what you do is X out of the computer and tell your parents about it.
     Ask them to stop.

                                   From Grant