persuasive letter

     Dear Mrs.McBride and Dr.Smith,
Imagine a world where you could post your writing on a blog and instead of having your teacher or classmate reading it,kids from Englang or Francecould read it.
    We should blog because it's fun,we should quad-blog becuse we meet new people(with adult super-vision),we should do Digital Diaries becuse you can get comments.
     we will have adult super-vision so that we will not go onto anything we are not supposed to.And the teachers will give multiple lessons so we know what a good and bad comment is.
     So can you do that,please