Persuasive letter:for blogging,and digtal diaries

Dear Mrs.McBride
     Imagine a kid from a whole diffrent country reading your work and writing, and even better they get to comment on your writing. You can't do that on a piece of paper.
    I think we should blog because kids can comment on your writing, kids from other countrys can see your writing, and it feels good to kids when they get a comment.
     You might say "what if kids get on something bad? All it takes is one click on the ex botton and gone.
     I want kids to get on bloggs and start blogging. Make a chang Mrs.Mcbride

                                                                                                      From,
                                                                                                          Drew